Monday, October 15, 2007

55 word story (final)

"Well Laura, it looks like I'm the only one without a prom date for tomorrow."
"Me and you both. Who needs a date? Let's go together."
After leaving the lunchroom, they run into their friend John.
"Hi Laura, pick you up from prom at 8:00p.m?"
"Prom? Laura!" Megan screams throwing down her friendship ring.

4 comments:

Zoua said...

hahahaha!!! i like the final version... it is really good!

EMiLEE said...

i LiKE THiS ONE. i Li KE H0W YOU ADDED "AS SHE THREW HER PR0MiSE RiNG" AT THE END. iT SH0WS G00D DEATAiL.

Melody_Anderson said...

ooo a friendship ring! it almost sounds liek shes calling off a weeding or sumthing lol. nice work

Jenna said...

hahaha, that's funny.
I like the ending.
Good job! :)