"Well Laura, it looks like I'm the only one without a prom date for tomorrow."
"Prom date? Who needs a prom date? We can go together."
After leaving the lunchroom, they run into their friend John.
"Hi Laura, pick you up for prom at 8:00p.m.?
"Prom? Laura!," Megan screamed in disgust.
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7 comments:
that was a good 55 word story good job
okay i had to delete that last one! but i like it better than the 1st one! i see that you changed the ending and it isn't confusing!
What a surprise ending. I can really picture the characters. Great job.
well i'd never! betrayle! i hate that shit..anyways...i really liked this one..like la creme de la creme (the best of the best) lol if ya didnt' kno
0 DANG! THAT WAS N0T 0K! HAHA...BUT YEA i LiKED Y0UR ST0RY..I CAN REALLY SEE THAT HAPPENiNG T0 S0ME0NE. Y0U DiD A G00D j0B 0F MAKiNG iT BELiEVEABLE...
I can really picture the characters in my head. A lot of people can def. relate to this situation too, you keep your reader very interested too. I really like the conflict and plot in your story too. Nice job!
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